Work with Tumelo · Screenwriting

Film Begins On the Page.

Original screenwriting, rewriting and script development for filmmakers, producers and writers.

The Craft

Writing as a Daily Practice.

I write every day, working on characters, scenes and the choices that move a story forward. That practice continues between productions.

Whether the project begins with one image, a rough premise or an existing draft, my first task is the same: find the story beneath the idea, then build the clearest and most cinematic version of it.

Tumelo Tlou reading the Echoes screenplay

Reviewing the Echoes Behind a Perfect Lens screenplay

Screenwriting Services

Wherever the Story Is.

You can bring an initial idea, a treatment or a complete draft. We start by discussing where the story stands and what you want help with.

Idea to Screenplay

Developing an initial concept through premise, character, dramatic structure, treatment and screenplay draft — while protecting the central idea that made the project worth pursuing.

Rewriting & Structural Editing

Identifying where an existing script loses tension, clarity, momentum or emotional logic, then rebuilding the material that is preventing the story from reaching its potential.

Script Consultation

Clear, detailed feedback for writers and filmmakers who need an informed second perspective before moving into the next draft, pitch or stage of development.

Character & Dialogue

Focused development of motivation, relationships, subtext, scene dynamics and dialogue — ensuring characters do not merely explain the story, but create it through their choices.

Available for short films, feature concepts, proof-of-concepts and selected episodic work.

From Page to Screen

Psychological Drama / Thriller · Short Film

Echoes Behind a Perfect Lens

A completed original screenplay carried from development into production — written, directed and produced by Tumelo Tlou.

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The Service

A Service Built Around the Story.

Every project requires a different level of development. After reviewing the idea or existing material, the scope, deliverables, timeline, revision process and fee are agreed clearly before the work begins. When working from an existing idea or draft, the aim is to strengthen the story without flattening the voice behind it.

Development conversations
Research and story exploration
Premise and character development
Treatment or outline
Screenplay drafting
Structural rewriting
Dialogue and character passes
Written script notes
Agreed revision rounds
Professionally formatted final documents

We agree the deliverables, revision rounds, fee and what material you need to provide before writing begins.

Screenwriting Enquiries

Have a Story in Mind?

Tell me where the project currently stands and what kind of support you are looking for.

Discuss Your Script